i am starting this thread because it seems right to discuss this in a more organized way rather than helter-skelter at the ends of various chapters.
1) you have some interesting stories that are very realistic that you are weaving together. you are a great storyteller, i had wondered if you were posting parts of someone's book.
2) i think that it needs it's own section; Stories of Plural Families, fiction. with no postings from the peanut gallery.
3) the absolute worst thing that i can say about it is that the golf-channel chapter is a dadgum slog thru the mud for those of us who do not appreciate the finer points of wandering around the pasture hitting balls into gopher holes :?
but that is just me. and if that is the worst thing that i can say about it, well shucks, it just might become a best seller.
1) you have some interesting stories that are very realistic that you are weaving together. you are a great storyteller, i had wondered if you were posting parts of someone's book.
2) i think that it needs it's own section; Stories of Plural Families, fiction. with no postings from the peanut gallery.
3) the absolute worst thing that i can say about it is that the golf-channel chapter is a dadgum slog thru the mud for those of us who do not appreciate the finer points of wandering around the pasture hitting balls into gopher holes :?
but that is just me. and if that is the worst thing that i can say about it, well shucks, it just might become a best seller.